This writer has told a story that really express the dreams and imaginations of all males - to be invisible and to be able to enjoy to view the secreits of all the opposite sex. Such a magical power has dominated lots of the males sexual desires for years, so this writer's novel has successfuly attracted the readers to go on reading his story. We must say, therefore, his topic - "Transparency Magic - The fantacy of all men" has a extreme strong power to induce the males to go into his dream word.

　The plot of the story is quite well placed. A poor young boy comes from the village to look for job oppportunities in the modern city, but due to his physcial weakness, he has failed to do so. It so happens he is helped a very kind hearted mature woman by offering him a job to work at her restraurent. Then he by chance meets a magician and acquires the magic power of becoming invisible, thus giving him a chance to seek for sex satisfaction by peeping, and close contacts with the opposite sex.

　The story itself is simple. Yet as I have said, it has carried a very strong magic power to the readers who are eager to know what sorts of exciting sex experiences he is going to explore, what sorts of woman or girls will fall into his hands. This is a good suspense that makes the story a success.

　But we are not very satisfied at the characterization of the boy, the beautiful and mature woman who offers him the job and the little girl who rejects him all the time. We only know that the boy is physically weak at the age of 16 and due to this fact most the shops take him as child labourer. That is all about this boy. Nothing special has been talked about his facial features and his complexions and his special features that will give us a deep impression. Neither have we been given a detailed descriptions of the mature woman except the fact that she is sexy with full round breasts. She is kind to him, without any stron supporting reasons, and offers a job to him. Neither have we been given any good description of the little girl (the woman's daughter)as well. What we know is that there is a boy living together with a woman and her daughter. This is too simple a characterization to make a successful novel to become true.

　The language used in this story, however, is quite successful, especially in describing the private parts of the female sex organs. The writer's describing of the inward feeling to do the evil thing and the moral force to draw him back is also nicely presented.

　Above all, this story carries a very new imagination to the male readers who all are very eager to become invisible so as to seek the mysteryies of the screts of the females. But the writer has lack of maturity in his characterization thus making the story has jumped too quic and making the readers a bit disappointing as they are not given too many detailed descriptions of the sex experience of the young boy.

　Anyway, this is a good attempt for a young writer.

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